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Fuchsia *Edited*

Fuchsia *Edited*

Painting Painting \ Figure | 04/10/04 @448 | meteormandy | Comments critiques (17) | Views views (3029)


Fuchsia *Edited*
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Painter 7, wacom, reference for girls, >10 hrs + 2 hrs

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Edited: smoother the lower body and adjust the color scheme
 
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Avatar GoTo

 04/10/04 @463

wow.. I'm voiceless.. she's so beautiful
The shape of the cloth looks strange, don't ask me why. but.. wow !!
+7
 
Sympho

 04/10/04 @501

red x @501 :/
 
Avatar Seide

 04/10/04 @511

picture doesnt show :(
 
meteormandy

 04/10/04 @542

oh red x?
maybe the server not stable.....anyway, I can see it..
 
Avatar Crow

 04/10/04 @554

if you cropped it and left only head, it would be +9/9 but torso looks weird, so it will be +6/9
 
jetlace

 04/10/04 @575

i really like your colors and the kind of distant/thoughtful expression on the woman's face :) my only suggestion would maybe look at her left breast underside i don't know what your reference looked like but it seems like there it should round up a little bit to make it more natural. what i really love about this piece are the touches of 'sparkle' you have had :) fairy dust? well done!
 
arenhaus

 04/10/04 @580

Airbrushy. Noticeable streaking on the arm, and as usual in such work, the face is much more detailed than the rest which looks hurried. It's also pretty clear that it's based on a photo: there is very little respect to color composition, the skin and hair are characteristic for a color-corrected studio shot done under white light, while the background is completely foreign and not interacting with the figure in any way. Color must form an integral composition; picking color from a photo achieves nothing.
 
mks5958

 04/10/04 @665

I have to agree that the torso seems a bit odd and that it, along with the arm and the clothing looks rather rushed and unfinished, but the head and neck are very nice. Perhaps we should see a glimpse of teeth in her mouth? Her expression is thoughtful and lovely, and I absolutely LOVE her hair and the strands of sparkles you've added to it. Thank you.
 
yerffej

 04/10/04 @769

This is great,she looks like Catherine Zeta Jones.The line heading towards her armpit seems a litte too high,and there is something off with her left breast and the line beneath it.

Everything else is tip top to me,although I dont think she'll be flying anywhere with those wings.^_^
 
lorien

 04/10/04 @783

magnificent pic! may be just shadow under her left breast too rude ^^
 
Avatar HottyToddy19

 04/10/04 @892

Well done. I'm hypnotized by those wonderful eyes. I agree, the underside of her left breast should curve more towards her armpit. The face however, is excellent and I love her expression. Well done.
 
meteormandy

 04/11/04 @212

thank you for your comments!!! I agreed arenhaus about the color problem, that was because I worked each part in different layers, I edited the color scheme a bit see is that looked better.
And those wings is my lovely addition, that made her so cute isn't she?! Please don't criticise those(kidding ^_*)
I knew there are still many problems, and I am still learning!
 
Lojza

 04/13/04 @469

I completely agree with jetlace. Nothing else to crit. I love (current) color scheme. It's good to see red colors with a fairy than usual blue/violet/white tones. This makes her much more sexy ;)
 
Avatar LadyHydralisk

 04/15/04 @200

Her head is too small for her body, and her breasts are shaped irregularily...it looks like a roll of fat under her left arm. I don't like the dress, it's a bit too prom queen for a faery...unless of course, it's a highschool girl wearing fake faery wings.The face looks very nice and smooth, but the expression is sort of weird, like she's just had a lobotomy. I think it's the tongue sticking out slightly.

The composition is less than good. Maybe crop the bottom off below the shoulder?
 
XiaoYu

 04/17/04 @831

Hmm. Agree with above comments about shape of breasts. If you want the cloth to look more natural, just lessen the shading at the edges of it so it'll look more like it's touching her skin. Her expression and dress style are your choice; I personally like them, especially her dreamy eyes. You might want to add a touch of teeth to her mouth instead of the tip of her tongue; that's probably what LadyHydralisk's pointing out with her comment about a lobotomy. Not very knowledgeable about the details of composition, but I like your sparkly, curly way of painting :) Btw, your username reminds me of the name of a certain popular show...or I just might be thinking too much. Keep up the lovely work!
 
Resilia

 04/18/04 @024

Wow!!! I love it!! that is awesome I love the colors!
 
vIxEn

 05/30/04 @061

I agree wif sum above..it's nicer only at the upper part...The head is surely not proportionated to her body..and the dress is not appropriate for a fairy..if she is one..
Orelz, the face , the sparkles on the hair and the wings are simply awesome
 
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